Hey, nice post!
I think that you are not ready yet to play this piece. There are several hints, for example:
- your thumb (l.h.) should never play towards the index finger
- fingers of the r.h. are not preparing for next notes
- tone is uneven
- rhythm is uneven
That are some points you could work on. It's your decision
I always remind myself: cleanness ALWAYS over speed! If you can't play something relaxed and clean in the supposed speed, than you have to play it at slower speed and gradually speed up. Muscles and brain learn, but slow. I think it has something to do with the motion moving to the reflex center of the brain. This takes A LOT time and work. Once it is in the reflex center, it stays there for ever