OK Haris, if you have the time to make this slightly more correct, look at how you are playing measure 23 (beginning of B section) and M27. You give equal time to, like a triplet I think, to the B-C-B combo. But the first B is an eighth note, and the others 16ths. Also in M35 you play the run with B-A-G-F# with all 8th notes, when it is written 8ths B-A and quarter notes G-F#. Should be an easy fix (maybe easier said than done on recording
) and will gain you a couple more points on rhythm I should think. Good luck! I just submitted mine!
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