Suite Del Recuerdo-Zamba

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Sushi

Suite Del Recuerdo-Zamba

Postby Sushi » Sat Nov 15, 2014 12:13 am

Here's the first few measures. I've been working on this part specifically for a few weeks total.

I think I may have rushed some parts (maybe), and the dynamics need work.

Please comment!
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leyenda

Re: Suite Del Recuerdo-Zamba

Postby leyenda » Sun Nov 16, 2014 9:07 am

Sushi wrote:Here's the first few measures. I've been working on this part specifically for a few weeks total.

I think I may have rushed some parts (maybe), and the dynamics need work.

Please comment!

i think it sounds really good so far and im no expert but here is my advice.
i would be careful to balance the melody and accomp. for example the beginning is mp in the score which you do well but the acomp. is much louder - try to soften this and stop the notes where indicated this, i thnik, will project the tune.
alos the drving rhythm, integral to the piece, could be accentuated with a bit of staccato where appropriate.
hope that helps, first one of this suite is beautiful might hacve a go myself this mornig.

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Re: Suite Del Recuerdo-Zamba

Postby Tonyyyyy » Sat Nov 22, 2014 3:37 am

Beautifully played. I have not played this one, but I know a couple of other Zambas.

I agree with Leyenda about the accentuating the rhythm - maybe a little more staccato in the bass while keeping the melody flowing?

Sushi

Re: Suite Del Recuerdo-Zamba

Postby Sushi » Wed Nov 26, 2014 7:25 pm

Thanks! Good advice about the rests/staccato.


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