My visits here have become too few and far between, but it's always a treat when I arrive to see a new recording by you! This is exceptional. The tempo is just perfect for me (I've heard this played too fast far too many times) and I love the articulation and voice separation.
As for the mics, I can hear a bit of noise that might get fixed by having the mics further away, but your tone is so good that there's even very little nail noise. Are these still the Rode's? They sound quite good.
"In music I think it's very, very dangerous if you start to compare and say, 'This is good, this is not good, this is only one possibility' . . . there are so many possibilities, but what is important is to be open to that." - Pavel Steidl