Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Fri Nov 30, 2012 9:51 pm

Lesson 15 Cont...

Part 5

Measure 19 & 20 Legato symbol missing between the C and the B
Leg10.jpg
Leg11.jpg
Leg12.jpg
Part 6

Legato symbol missing in measure 25-26 between D & F
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Leg14.jpg
Part 7

Legato symbol missing in measure 26-27 between F and E
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Fri Nov 30, 2012 9:53 pm

Lesson 15 Cont...

Part 9

Last measure second beat, the harmonic note symbol could be used on the chord...
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Tue Dec 04, 2012 2:37 am

Lesson 16

Part 1

In measure 1 and 15 there are expression markings missing.

Elegante in measure 1 and risoluto in measure 15.
Exp1.jpg
Exp2.jpg
Exp3.jpg
Exp4.jpg
Part 2

Measure 8 3rd beat, there is a wrong left hand finger indication on the D, -2- instead of -3-, w will be used on the next F.
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Part 3

Measure 12 2nd beat, there is a wrong left hand finger indication on the G -2- instead of -3-
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Tue Dec 04, 2012 2:47 am

Lesson 17

Part 1

Again stepping ahead here as I look for these mistakes first...

Measure 15 there is a missing position 2 marker.
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Missing2.jpg
Part 2

Missing a legato sign between C in measure 5 and A in measure 6.
Liais3.jpg
Liais4.jpg
Part 3

Measure 21 (without the repeat) first beat, wrong left hand finger indication -2- instead of -3-
Finger5.jpg
Finger6.jpg
Part 4

Measure 22-23 legato sign missing between the G in the last beat and the B in the first.
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Part 5

Measure 23 first beat, the sting indication (2) for the E should be moved to the right a bit.
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Tue Dec 04, 2012 3:01 am

Lesson 17 cont...

Part 6

Measure 32 first beat missing left hand finger indications -1-2-
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Tue Dec 04, 2012 3:03 am

Lesson 18

Part 1

2 Errors in the first measure.

1. Missing the 2/4 meter
2. First beat upper register is a G in the original, an F in the copy (will try it on guitar and report back.)
Meas1.jpg
Meas2.jpg
* Tomorrow I will add more (if there is anything else) to this lesson editing below this post...

EDIT #2 Forget error 2, it sounds better with the F, error on the original
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Tue Dec 04, 2012 10:17 pm

* Note nothing else to be reported in lesson 18 a few missing finger indications here and there observed but not needed...

Lesson 19

Part 1

Dynamic indications missing over measure 6 "crescendo" and 7 "diminuendo"
Cresc1.jpg
Dim2.jpg
Part 2

Missing time signature
Time3.jpg
Time4.jpg
Part 3

Measure 2 first beat wrong left finger indication -2- instead of -3- on the F (sharp)... But will try it on guitar, stretch might be easier that way :wink: EDIT 3 is more natural, 2 IS the stretch keep with original's suggestion
Wrong5.jpg
Wrong6.jpg
Part 4

Measure 3 last beat not the same chord and fingering will have to try it and report back. EDIT both sound OK but the original's version B chord gives a better voice leading and finger movement. Make correction to the finger notation and notes :)
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Tue Dec 04, 2012 10:24 pm

Lesson 19 cont...

Part 5

Two issues here:

1. measure 7 missing the rubato dynamic indication
2. Last beat missing -4- finger on D and -3- finger on F indications.
Finger9.jpg
Finger10.jpg
Part 6

Measure 9 & 10 (skipping the intro measure in the count)

1. Missing one thumb indicaiton -p- in first beat meas. 9
2. Misplaced -p- indications in measure 10 on both beats can they be lowered?
Thumb11.jpg
Thumb12.jpg
Part 7

Possible error in original? Will report back.

Measure 11 first beat, C is set to natural in the original, not in the copy. EDIT definitely A minor, as the next chord in the measure is A minor again in higher position, C natural here.
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Part 8

Possible error in original?

Measure 14 first beat, C remains sharp in copy, goes to natural in original. EDIT error in the copy, Natural C here is better
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Tue Dec 04, 2012 10:26 pm

Lesson 19 cont...

Part 9

Again possible error on original,

Last measure wrong string indication (6) instead of (5) for the E Harmonic... Hum...I'll check EDIT...Just did, original is correct (5) string it is
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Bernhard Heimann » Wed Dec 05, 2012 9:01 am

Hi Denis,

it's time that I show up again (after a short holiday).
And it's time to say thank you once more for your thorough and precious work,
which will definitely improve the quality of the pre-final edition, at least of the parts you have worked on.

Bernhard

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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Wed Dec 05, 2012 9:59 pm

Bernhard Heimann wrote:Hi Denis,

it's time that I show up again (after a short holiday).
And it's time to say thank you once more for your thorough and precious work,
which will definitely improve the quality of the pre-final edition, at least of the parts you have worked on.

Bernhard
My pleasure really Bernhard,

hope I finish this current task before my holidays, I should be able to at this rate, I leave for 2 weeks Dec. 22nd.

Cheers!

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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Wed Dec 05, 2012 10:04 pm

Lesson 20

Part 1

Missing time signature
Sig1.jpg
Sig2.jpg
Part 2

Measure 1 missing LH finger indication -1- on first beat A
Finger3.jpg
Finger4.jpg
Part 3

Measure 4 second beat missing LH finger indications (particularly the open string on E) -0- -3- -2-
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Part 4

Measure 8 second beat, wrong LH finger indication -2- instead of -1-
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Wed Dec 05, 2012 10:08 pm

Lesson 20 cont...

Part 5

Measure 13 last beat missing a LH finger indication on the B
Left9.jpg
Left10.jpg
Part 6

Measure 15 missing LH finger indications on the A & E -3- & -1-
Hand11.jpg
Hand12.jpg
Part 7

Measure 16 two issues here:

1. The LH finger missing on last beat -1-
2. The string indication (4) should be shifted towards the note.
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Two14.jpg
Part 8

Measure 22 second beat missing LH finger indications -1- on the D & F
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Wed Dec 05, 2012 10:11 pm

Lesson 20 Cont...

Part 9

Measure 27 second beat, missing a LH indication -2- on the A
SecondBeat17.jpg
SecondBeat18.jpg
Part 10

Measure 30 first beat, wrong LH finger indication -2- instead of -3- will try on guitar and report back. EDIT 3 is better.
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Try20.jpg
Part 11

Measure 30-31 two issues here:

1. Missing LH finger indication -1- on first notes of last beat
2. Missing LH finger indication -4- on the G used in the legado over measure 31
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Wed Dec 05, 2012 10:13 pm

Lesson 21

Part 1

As noted in previous lessons all the appogiatures in this lesson have the small font issue.
Appo1.jpg
I'll look for more in this lesson tomorrow...

Part 2

Legado sign missing in the pick-up measure
Legado2.jpg
Legado3.jpg
Part 3

Measure 28 the (4) string indication for the first beat is shifted to the right...
Shift4.jpg
Shift5.jpg
That's all I could find in this lesson. Next one tomorrow.


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