Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Sat Dec 08, 2012 1:00 am

Lesson 22

Part 1

Missing time signature
Time1.jpg
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Part 2

Small fonts issue on all the acciaccaturas
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Part 3

Measure 29 wrong fretting indicated over the second beat harmonic, -12- instead of -5-

*Note in case the original would have been wrong the same harmonic G (properly indicated in the copy) is found in measure 21 & 26. I'll double check on guitar and report back. EDIT original is right, the only measure in error is this current one 5 is the correct fret for the G harmonic
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Sat Dec 08, 2012 1:04 am

Lesson 23

Part 1

Measure 4 last sixtenth note of the first beat, wrong string indication (2) instead of (3)
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Part 2

Measure 5 second sixteenth note first beat, missing LH finger indication -1-
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Part 3

Measure 7 on both beats, missing a few LH finger indications, (Ommitted one missing on purpose) -2-1-1-1-2-
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Part 4

Measure 11 missing a LH finger indication in the first beat over the F -4-
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Sat Dec 08, 2012 1:08 am

Lesson 23 Cont...

Part 5

Measure 12 there is a missing string indication (3) on the D in the first beat, suggest shifting the one in the last beat there instead of repeating as was done in the original.
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Part 6

Measure 13 same as previous measure missing string indication (3) (on the E this time) in the first beat, suggest shifting the one in the last beat there instead of repeating as was done in the original.
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Part 7

Measure 15 first beat, missing a string indication (4) for the A
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Tue Dec 11, 2012 11:56 pm

Lesson 24

Part 1

Missing string (3) and LH finger -3- indication in the leading measure
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Part 2

Measure 1 first beat, missing LH finger -2- & -3-
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Part 3

Missing LH indication -1-3-2 on the first beat of measure 13.
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Missing6.jpg
Also missing same beat LH finger -1-2-
Missing7.jpg
Second beat also missing LH Finger indication -1-2- will have to try this measure out on guitar numerous finger switching around... I'll report back. EDIT original has the correct LH finger notation
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Post by Denis Paradis » Wed Dec 12, 2012 12:03 am

Lesson 24 cont...

Part 4

Again that small font issue on all of these (acciaccatura illustrated here) throughout the remainder of this lesson.
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Part 5

Same measure (17) second beat LH finger indication missing -2-
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finger12.jpg
Part 6

Measure 19 second beat missing a LH finger indication -4-
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Part 7

Measure 23-24 again will have to try it on guitar, somewhat contradictory notation here as there is a ligado indication but in the original the B is indicated as open string (missing indication in the copy -0-) the slur symbol would be better off here?

EDIT OK there are numerous corrections needed here... First that last beat of measure 23 is in Position VI not present in original secondly there is an error in the LH indication on that last beat in the original, invert the -2- & -3-... -2- is used for the A and 3 on the F# this way going back (hence the ligado) to position 1 to play first beat of next measure the hand is correctly in position to play B with finger -2- and D# with -1-
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Part 8

Measure 24 last beat missing LH finger indications -1-2-2- and also string indication (6) on the B
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Post by Denis Paradis » Wed Dec 12, 2012 12:07 am

Lesson 24 Cont...

Part 9

Measure 28 first beat missing string indication (4)
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Part 10

Measure 29 second beat missing LH finger indications -1-1-1
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Thu Dec 13, 2012 12:27 am

Lesson 25

Only one section in this one, all I could find:

Measure 9 first beat, there are two errors but the string indication (6) can be omitted there is no other way of playing the A with the -2- finger in fourth position. The -1- over the F is missing.
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Post by Denis Paradis » Thu Dec 13, 2012 12:28 am

Lesson 26

Part 1

Measure 22 missing the Con Fuoco dynamic indication.
Fuoco1.jpg
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Part 2

First measure last beat missing LH finger indication -4-3- and RH finger -i-
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Part 3

Measure 3 & 4 missing string indication (5) (3) (2) in meas. 3, suggest moving the ones in measure 4 there and not repeating like was done in the original.
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Part 4

Measure 9 last beat missing LH finger indications -1-4-3-
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* I am not through proofreading this lesson I will pickup where I left tomorrow
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Post by Denis Paradis » Thu Dec 13, 2012 10:24 pm

Lesson 26 cont...

Part 5

Measure 30 first beat LH finger indications -1-3- missing and string indications (3) & (4).

String (6) not a necessity, Position VI covers.
String9.jpg
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Part 6

Measure 31 first and second beat missing LH finger indications -1-2-4-3- and -1-
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Part 7

Measure 46 last beat suggest adding LH finger -3- and string (5) other indications from the original are already given in previous beat.
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Post by Denis Paradis » Thu Dec 13, 2012 10:29 pm

Lesson 27

No significant indications missing in this lesson apart maybe in measure 15, I will try it and report back.

Edit Hum... No problem in first two beats but fingering is awkward for the last two beats in the original...

You have to bar both the E and A with finger -1-, -2- is assigned to C# this way you can play the slur on the F# with -3-

It would be more natural with -1- E -2- A -3- C# leaving -4- for the slur on F#
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Thu Dec 13, 2012 10:30 pm

Lesson 28

Part 1

Measure 7 The VII position marker is to high.
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Part 2

Time signature missing.
Meter2.jpg
Meter3.jpg
Part 3

Measure 4 first beat missing a LH finger indication -2-
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Part 4

Measure 6 first beat LH finger indications missing -1-3-
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Part 5

Measure 7 second to third beat, a difference in notation, copy suggest a ligado with finger -4- original changes to finger -3-

Will try on guitar and report back.

EDIT Both are valid, the copy's version has my vote :wink:
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Fri Dec 14, 2012 12:02 am

Lesson 28 cont...

Part 6

Measure 7 last beat missing a LH indication -1-
Missing10.jpg
Missing11.jpg
Part 7

Measure 8 2nd beat missing a LH finger indication -4-
LHF12.jpg
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Part 8

Measure 13 there is a missing LH finger indication -3- beat 1 and 2, need to try it on guitar. Will report back.

EDIT Hum.... Fingering is not really a problem once you figured in which position you need to play this section... What is really missing is a Position X marker from the A on the last beat of measure 12 spanning up to the end of measure 13 error on the original (I believe ?)
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Bernhard Heimann » Fri Dec 14, 2012 8:28 am

Hi Denis,

thank you once more - you must have been rather busy in the late evening!

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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Fri Dec 14, 2012 7:42 pm

Actually I look at it, take captures and edit while lunching...

Once back home I post them on the forum just before supper...

Once posted I check the various passages that need to be on guitar.
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Re: Sagreras_Las_Cuartas_Lecciones for proof-readers

Post by Denis Paradis » Mon Dec 17, 2012 10:13 pm

* Dual monitor set-up at work really helps proofreading, one version on one monitor and the other side by side.

Lesson 29

Only one thing to report for this lesson:

Measure 14 first beat, there are missing LH indications -4-2-3-
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