Good job here.
I've been working on this piece for about 2 years and, like so many of his pieces, it's about getting the feel and the flow right, and you go a long way to achieving that. Kudos.
Of course the terrifying bit is the descent, descrbed as "harp like" by AY in the score IIRC. You should feel proud because I think you did a far better job than one renowned guitarist on that one: Search "Kaki King Andecy live Berkeley" on YT and you'll see what I mean. To be fair, that looks like an impromptu audience recording, but shows we are all fallible and gives hope to bedroom noodlers like me.