Jeffrey Chan wrote: ↑
Fri Sep 29, 2017 4:23 am
Here is my attempt at Vaghe bellezze e bionde trecce d'oro vedi che per ti moro !
Thanks in advance for the comments/feedback.
Hello Jeffrey and welcome to D05.
Nicely played on the Vaghe... You have a nice tone and the recording quality is excellent. You also play it nice and slow which is always a good the when you first start to play a piece - I have a tendancy to try and rush things, especially when the camera is turned on. Of course, I play better when the camera is off!
I would like to make a couple of minor points on the piece if I may.
1. At the end of bar 3 I think you play a quaver instead of a crotchet, ie you play it too fast. The same again in bar 10.
2.The high F at the start of bar 21 should not be played as it is a tied note.
3. Difficult to comment on your fingering etc., as you only have audio and not video.
Apart from that, very well done, just need to work on the speed a little now.
Keep up the good work!