Hey Colin, I like your submission. Improvisation is interesting and nontrivial, Andantino is played properly (but without repeats though as Chu mentioned). Also, I like your right hand technique.
Thanks folks. Yes I decided not to do the repeats until I am more proficient.
Possibly, but it seemed to me that the assignment was for those four notes in 0/I position
This is pretty good, John. I like how you keep trebles ringing as long as possible. In part 2 some shifts are done a little bit too early (0:30 - 0:31).
Pretty fluent playing, RH finger alternation is great. I think the bass line could be a bit louder though (I've got a similar problem, working on it). Also, some damps are missing, but with soft bass line it is unnoticeable.