that's really coming along!!
I don't really mind the "sighs"
in the first pass through section 1 but I'd probably not be quite so different on the repeat (and I really prefer pass 2 through section 1). Still you accoplished what I think you were shooting for so that's what's really important now anyway. Remembering that it is a Lento piece as well!!
ALso - I THINK (dangerous at the best of times) that Adelita is a mazurka - just as a note if that helps with the phrasing and stuff.
All in all I'd say GREAT pass at it and a terrific addition to the OWMP for this one!!