Very nicely done! I agree with John, it does sound a bit on the bright side.
It seems like you've paid good attention to the detail of not letting the bass notes ring too long, so everything sounds very clean!
One thing I think you can do now to make it a little better would be to have a lighter touch with the right hand, and don't put as much emphasis on every downbeat (i.e. the 1st and 4th 8th notes of each measure). If you let the phrases get drawn out over a whole measure or two or even four, then the piece will really sing!